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Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon

0 posted 2000-03-20 04:28 PM


Untitled

Time and again
I feel the pain
Familiar now
As an old friend
A companion
Through many nights
Shaping my dreams
Taking it's toll
Yet comfortable
In it's strangeness
To accept pain
So easily
Insanity?

Copyright 1999
Gary Pence
  



 Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night.
-Edgar Allen Poe


© Copyright 2000 Gary - All Rights Reserved
StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
1 posted 2000-03-20 05:37 PM


Great Jonas !  

To accept pain
So easily
Insanity?


No never insanity I think it is a learned behavior ... so use to pain  something is not right when it is not there  


 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-03-20 05:42 PM


Great job!!
insanity? well, I don't know...if a person is insane, can they be capable of realizing it?

take care,
Broken Wings  


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-20 08:55 PM


Time and again
I feel the pain
Familiar now
As an old friend
A companion
----------
jonas, this is great, i all too well related to this ones emotions...
insane in the pain...perfect poem
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman



Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon
4 posted 2000-03-20 10:14 PM


Thank you StarrGazer, Broken Wings, and Janet Marie. This poem is sort of open to many different types of pain...just depends on the reader.

 Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night.
-Edgar Allen Poe


Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-03-21 12:27 PM


Jonas,
Great poem.  I relate to the pain being your companion.  After a while you numb to it though.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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