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demonic~angel
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Kansas

0 posted 2000-03-20 12:29 PM


Icy hands surround me
I can't see
Morbid melodies I hear
Filling my ears

My soul dripping black with sin
It seeps through my skin
Paranoia fills my brain
I am truly insane




 Messenger of fear in sight
Dark deception kills the light
~Metallica~

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CrEaTuRe
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since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia
1 posted 2000-03-20 01:06 PM


A nice piece short yet the feelings are easy to be seen  sometimes all of us are little  .......great job dear ....  
StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
2 posted 2000-03-20 03:36 PM


Love this DA great job !!! ((((hugzzz))))

 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
3 posted 2000-03-20 04:54 PM


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 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~





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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
4 posted 2000-03-20 05:01 PM


God dam...oke I'll stop..well I messed up while typing it in..lol..don't I feel like an idiot...but anywayz...Wonderful poem DA! Keep'em coming!  

           Yours truly,
             Angel


 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~


Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
5 posted 2000-03-20 05:29 PM


nice. a lot said in a few words.

 Dont wake the dead,
Wake the dying,
Don't change what you've said,
Change what you're saying.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-03-20 08:31 PM


Such despair in so few words, that is an accomplishment, well done!!!  You are not a sinner or insane either!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2000-03-21 01:20 AM


DA. . . paranoia can take away things from us that we love. . .

Again, you have managed to say a lot in a few words... a talent that does not go by unappreciated. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


demonic~angel
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since 2000-03-11
Posts 54
Kansas
8 posted 2000-03-21 05:10 AM


Thanks for your replies all of you *huggz*...I thought it is too short...but hey if ya'll like it then I will do more like this one...*s*

 Messenger of fear in sight
Dark deception kills the light
~Metallica~

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