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Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.

0 posted 2000-03-18 07:07 PM


                                    Sadness


It feels that I’ve known you all my life


In the good times and the bad times you are always
there with me


I feel your presence with every heartbeat


You are the last thing on my mind when I go to sleep


And you are the first thing that enters my mind when I awake


I’ve often wondered how I would feel if you left


But you are always quick to remind me that you will never leave me


You are my sadness, and I don’t know where I end and you begin.






 

© Copyright 2000 ~ Vanessa ~ - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2000-03-18 07:13 PM


Welcome, Broken Wings...I too have someone I have always counted on for support.  I feel I may lose him and the thought is frightening.  Well done!!
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-03-18 07:25 PM


hi and welcome to passions...
this is beautiful broken wings...the last line is perfect... very nice to have you here with us.
take care, jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-03-18 07:35 PM


Welcome to Passions and the dark forum.  Loved your first posting.  If you find a someone be them male or female and they are your anam cara, hang on, don't ever let them go.  True good friends are such a gift in the ol' world.  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
4 posted 2000-03-18 08:06 PM


Thank you all for the welcome and your kind comments. I started writing not so long ago and it fills me with happiness to know that someone liked it.
Broken Wings  


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
BY: IYANLA VANZANT

Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
5 posted 2000-03-19 01:46 AM


it does seems that way doesn't it when you love someone that much.  

I don’t know where I end and you begin.

i love that line.  

StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
6 posted 2000-03-19 02:36 AM


Broken Wings lovely first post  !!!!!

 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
7 posted 2000-03-19 05:03 PM


simply lovely. welcome.
jannel

 "I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"



Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
8 posted 2000-03-19 06:52 PM


hiyah!-
howya doin and welcome to Passions.  I liked your poem.  I can definately relate to that one.
bye
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


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