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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas 
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I feel its strong hard walls everywhere around me my hands meet a barrier I'm trapped, no way out let me out of here! set me free! I'm fighting to get out gasping for air the more I struggle the closer the walls come in I've got to get out or I cannot be I feel death's cruel grasp choking the fight out of me taunting me to give up nothing matters anymore lost in the darkness as I fight a side of me that I don't want anyone to see ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
This one...to me its like describin' my attacks...and its scarry b/c **** i feel like i am goin' insane...and i can't even write about it...its so hard and it seems that it don't want me to write about "it"...yea i am goin' insane...very hauntin' *cries*...*huggz* very good... Messenger of fear in sight Dark deception kills the light ~Metallica~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Good depiction of the scarier self, the one that visits us all from time to time, but we can't share with anyone for we FEEL they'd think us mad. Well done  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow your on a roll tonite(smile) this is so good...the last lines impact is awesome...when your good-- your so good  take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
a kind of jekyll and hyde complex huh? very well written! like i've said over and over...you, my friend, are good! please tell me, though,...do you always feel like this? just curious! keep this up cuz i'm having too much fun reading your stuff to stop now!! |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
DA- just what I was describing *s* ((((hugz)))) Isis - thanks Janet Marie- thanks for your too kind words... I just get in these moods and have to write about it or I go insane Aiden Kelly - thanks again , though I do not see myself as being any where near as goos as I aspire to be ... and to answer your question I'm like this a lot unfortunately, I have obsessive complusive disorder, anxiety attacks and major depression and sometimes it just hits really hard like it has been lately ... but I'll be okay "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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