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This Is How I Feel |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
This all means nothing And nothing is real I can’t help myself This is how I feel Most of the time I’m like some kind of ghost And sometimes I take pleasure In things that hurt me most And sometimes I feel I’m drowning Choking on my bitter tears Or clawing at the one thing Ringing in my ears I’ll take anything I can Time never seems to heal The pain, this wounding pain This is how I feel They still keep taunting me Numb my hurting head I’m lost and all alone You’ve left me for dead Sometimes I can protect myself Until the embracing dawn Or lose control From the one thing hanging on You can paint me in a corner Lock me up, throw away the key You still just don’t get it This is how I feel |
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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
WoW! This is awesome...very dark and mysteriously written...you obvisouly have a great talent...*huggz* Messenger of fear in sight Dark deception kills the light ~Metallica~ |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I love this JML...sometimes no matter how often or how loud you tell people...they never do understand that this is just how you feel. And if your like me, you can't help it. And you try to get rid of it...but it's all in vain. But your not all alone my friend...they've left me for dead as well and although some of that may be true...I'm still here for any soul that is in need of me. I enjoy reading your words...keep writing please...they bring me comfort. Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Most of the time I’m like some kind of ghost And sometimes I take pleasure In things that hurt me most And sometimes I feel I’m drowning Choking on my bitter tears Or clawing at the one thing Ringing in my ears I’ll take anything I can Time never seems to heal The pain, this wounding pain This is how I feel --------------- wow jer, this poem is awesome...i feel you in this...literally...deep emotional piece...makes me wanna hold you..  stalking you still, your jm |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
makes sense to me! why is it that we are all so often misunderstood? maybe if everyone listened we'd be able to understand and relate better with each other. i understand exactly how you feel. sometimes i think i'm crazy to feel like that. now i know i'm not alone! thanks! great writing!  ) |
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