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Chico
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 67


0 posted 2000-03-17 12:47 PM


My only crime !!!

I know I'd die for you;
  if just given the chance.
just hoping that I might;
  catch the slightest little glance.
And in that last instant;
  before life and death.
That you would be there present,
  To hear my last breath.
And that on you lips;
  Would be my name.
As your tear drips;
  on my quivering frame.
That you would hold me tight;
  And ask me why.
And tell me It's not right;
  That I should die.
But in the wanning time;
  I would Smile and be tough.
Knowing that my only crime;
  Was not loving you enough...

I love you Avei...



© Copyright 2000 Chico - All Rights Reserved
StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
1 posted 2000-03-17 07:56 AM


Chico, this was very beautiful and touching !! keep up the good work  

 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~



TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
2 posted 2000-03-17 06:59 PM


Beautiful...and warming...I feel this way WAY too much! I hope you are noticed without having to take the place of this person...That you seem to love sooooo much...

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-03-17 07:18 PM


A hard lesson to learn but you appear to have become a better person for it.  That is all we can hope for... Well done  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
4 posted 2000-03-18 11:59 PM


i like this!  it's amazing what love can motivate us to do!  


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