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Nothing Of A Man |
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LenMcC1 Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 68 |
Nothing Of A Man I am freezing uncontrollably As my sister sings a lullaby To a turtle necked priest With locks of gold Floating on down The lake of charms Waiting for a saint To carry his soul Through Satan’s lair On his way down to the core I’ve got a feeling That my sister is still singing While a Harper Lee character Is floating in the sun And a Southern Gentleman Is wasting away And nothing is more appealing Than a closet full Of drag junkies Thinking of a way To invade the mind of an undetermined Society of Aristocrats and Newspaper men I think I agree With a choice to be free Even though my incestuous sister still sings A lullaby of Thomas Jones poem |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Len this is amazing, imaginative, imagery the works!!! I'm a nothing of a woman today myself - long story. Welcome to Passions and the dark forum hope to read more like this soon!!  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i agree with isis, wonderful work. and i look forward to reading more. |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
i like the way you have with words. and the allusions are cool cuz they're not the everyday...i especially like the dante and Harper Lee allusions! i'm a huge fan of poems that i have to read multiple times b/c they make me think!! great job! welcome to passions!!  ) |
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