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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods 
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This poem I wrote two years ago, it was a part of my suicide note. It might not be the best poem I`ve written, but as you probably can understand it`s the one that means the most to me. It reminds me of the worst time of my life. That`s why I chose the nickname "Broken" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ BROKEN I`m lower than ever It`s slower than ever I can`t remember the sound of my laughter I can`t imagine me ever smiling again These last few days I`ve been a living dead And the screams ring on in my head "You`re nothing!" "You mean nothing!" It`s breaking me down And tearing me apart I`m just a shadow of my former self This is my last cry for help And all the reasons I once had The reasons to live Have turned against me Now they`re reasons to die I dedicate my suicide to those Whose pain were to big a burden to bear Whose lifes were to cruel to live To those who were destine to die And in dispair I cry for you I light a candle and beg Please let me in, please treat me well Greet me warm as I join in to I`ve had enough, let me go You cut me to hard The wounds are to deep No I don`t need a doctor A doctor can`t heal my soul I hate myself, more than ever So take my life As you took everything And tonight... Tonight gods will make love in my empty bed Cause the words you said Rings on and on and on in my breaking head You broke me down I`m broken... |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
A sound so familiar to me...and I understand how this poem means so much to you even though it speaks of your most painful moments. I have many like this...I just recently wrote one that would be my goodbye...whatever I have...is slowly coming to an end. But that's beside the point...this was wonderful and beautiful to me no matter what it speaks of. But I hope thoughts of your death have left your mind...atleast somewhat. Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Broken~ I felt the pain pouring out. I'm so glad you are here. -SEA |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Thanks. It helps knowing others feel the same way I do. I glad you`re here supporting me. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Tonight gods will make love in my empty bed Cause the words you said Rings on and on and on in my breaking head You broke me down I`m broken... ------------- this poem sent a chill thru me...its emotions move me...your pain reads so poetically perfect in this... I'm most of all grateful your still here to share this...others can also find healing and strength in your words. take care, please. jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
ok, i cried and my heart is heavy b/c i felt the same way just 2 years ago. i think this poem may be your best for the simple reason that it lays your soul bare and touches everyone who reads it to the core. i'm glad you made it through, hon. it's hard but death isn't worth it. there really is sooo much to live for. i wish that when i was sooo very depressed i could have seen that. but i've learned so much as i'm sure you did too. you're a wonderful poet, hon. keep it up! love you, my friend.  |
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