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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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These were written over a 2 week period in june of 1998. I apologies for the length, but if I were to post them seperate they would not make sence. SERIEL KILLER I If I were a killer, this would be my greatest thriller. To kill you slow, quietly, so no one will know. To watch your blood flow out from you in a flood. To feel your coldness, "Excuse me for my boldness!" If I were a killer this would be my greatest thriller. To keep one rememberence of what was yours, hidden behind my closed doors. To keep your eyes, that way the soul never dies. If I were a SERIEL KILLER.... SERIEL KILLER II One more night for the SERIEL KILLER. One more chapter to my thriller. I can smell your skin, the sweat stirs my deamons within. I feel the urges coming on. The feelings are becoming, oh, so strong. This has been coming for so long. One more night for the SERIEL KILLER. One more chapter to my thriller. I can almost hear the blood pumping through your vains. I can not wait to watch as it drains. I was awake all this past night concentrating on my fright. One more night for the SERIEL KILLER. One more chapeter to my thriller. My morbid thoughts haunt my mind like deamons of an evil kind. I can rob your mind, and your eyes I steal, as your fate of death I will seal. One more night for the SERIEL KILLER. One more chapter to my thriller. Keep in mind to never underestimate my stealth. To me it is my minds one great wealth. My cuts will be deep. So for long I will not have to hear you weep. In your frozen look of perfect silence my horrid memory will make its residence. One more night for the SERIEL KILLER. One more chapter to my thriller. My deamons will have thier righteousness when your body is cold with rigormortis. My calm will return when my deamons slumber deep and no longer twist and turn. One more night for the SERIEL KILLER. One more chapter to my thriller... HIS TEAR (SERIEL KILLER III) I lay her upon these bloody sheets as my owner terrorizes these streets. He has become his own thriller. He is the "SERIEL KILLER." I have long sence left his fear. I am the only thing he holds dear. I am his tear. I have been shed here upon this blood filled bed. When his deamons twist and turn and his mind does burn - in the wake of his blood bath. I am all that will remains of his path. He has become his own thriller. He is the "SERIEL KILLER." I will remain here upon these bloody sheets as my owner terrorizes these streets. Tinted with thier blood, holding his fear. I am his tear. He is the "SERIEL KILLER." SERIEL KILLER IV I can smell the sweat and fear. I will inhale every last tear. I have taken an existance. My body has inhaled your last breath in the flesh of death. I scream, not with rage, but with exstacy of my killing dream. Such an exquisite face. I will now shroud it in lace. The softest of skin. It will now rot with the decomposition within. The deepest of eyes. Now unable to utter the slightest of lies. Such peaceful lips. Now layed upon them wilting flowers, violet tulips. I take with me only one thing of your existance. The knowledge that I did this. One more night. One more fright. One more victim has lost its fight. For I raom these dark streets once again and I am here to remain. To allow the entire world to see my thriller... I am the SERIEL KILLER!! There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
A-Alibaster~ this played out like a movie and sounds like a song! Very well done!!!  -SEA |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
So much emotion showed in words that may terririze others but would but relive yourself from itself... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I must admit this scared me a little. Images a little too vivid! Yikes. Well, still a good job! Joy |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Honey this is great! I really enjoyed it. I will just take this opportunity to remind everyone that we IN NO WAY condone killers, Jack the Ripper etc. We must also be aware of other readers and try not to be too graphic. I understand where you are coming from with this so I won't need to close or delete it. Please just remember in the future. Otherwise well done !!!! May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Chilling!!!.. makes one wonder (not really!) who is behind the writing... This one really takes my breath away.......... Kim |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
you scare me! you wouldn't happen to be into that "why serial killers kill" stuff would you? cuz it seems to me you kinda know what you are talking about... unless of course...  nah...you're no serial killer! i love the way you wrote this! such vivid imagery! i especially liked the tear one...powerful poetry! |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Isis and all, I did not know it was possible to be too graffic, but I do understand what you are saying... and as Isis stated...NO I do not condone killing in any way...I apologies if this bothered some! I simpley wrote what I thought came to me... To answer the question put forthe of wether I am into "what makes a seriel killer kill?"...yes I am, I read much on the subject and have always wondered what makes some go that far, but not the rest of us...it is some thing that trigures my wonder, that is all. I AM NOT A SERIEL KILLER AND DO NOT THINK THAT THE ACTIONS OF ONE ARE RIGHT!!! BTW...the question has also been put forthe to me of my gender, becuase of the things that I write...seems most ppl find things like I write to be a male thing..... I AM FEMALE...just to clear that up as well!! PLEASE....this is in no way ment to condone violence of any sort..... After I read Isis' post and the others, I felt that I should state the things that I have to answer the questions going through alls minds... Many thank yous... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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