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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-03-14 11:41 AM



Pain apart
Reachs down
torn hearts
hold me now

All here in
Me creates
eternal sins
Fathers hate

please soul
drowned me
swallowed whole
hear me growl

Here we are
In the place
hold my heart
to your face

do you see me
in the dark
deep down low
where dogs don't bark

  Did you write the Book of Love
And do you have faith in God above
If the Bible tells you so
Do you believe in rock 'n roll
Can music save your mortal soul
And can you teach me how to dance real slow


© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
CrEaTuRe
Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia
1 posted 2000-03-14 11:53 AM


Walter this is full of meaning yet in few words you put a picture of hurt that speak for itself....great job dear
virgil baichoo
New Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 8

2 posted 2000-03-14 12:26 PM


Walter the pen is mighter than the sword and with your imaginative words you brought your poem to life . Keep them comming.
onelove
virgil

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-14 03:31 PM


walter...your pen drips with darkness and pain in this one...but as always...with perfection of emotion.
take care, jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



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