*walks around with a limp*
No, I really have no idea where that came from. Merely trying to express what I was thinking... which was.... damn. I use that a lot in response to your poetry, but, most of the time, your work leaves me that way.... can't quite put it into words. I would surmise the combination of imegry, depth, and darkness. Anyhoo...
"The despair sinks deep
into the heart of my fleshy tomb
and spreads through my veins
and seeps into my lungs.
Weight placed upon my every breath,"
What imegry! You take the idea of despair and freshly describe in such a way there is no doubt in our minds what it can be like... to drag one's self out of such despair is a hard-earned meddle of bravery, and courage.
"A dark angel,
clinging onto grace."
I'm curious... who is the dark angel here.... you, or the shadow?
"Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter"