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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-03-13 07:26 PM


Ideas
Plans
Emostions
Thoughts

Scatter threw my head
Wondering if I am screwed
In the head
Or just insaine

I shouldn't think these things
What wrong with me

Mommy takes me to the doctor
The give me medication
I get addicted to it
The day the take it away
I go to the hospital

I am like a walking
Time boom
About to go off

I shake like crazy
The one that understands me
Tells me to calm down
He holds my hand to stop the shaking

The tell me if my heart rate over exellerates
That if I don't releaxe
I could have a heart problem

May I ask
What do I do

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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Posts 22676
with you
1 posted 2000-03-13 11:02 PM


Neala~ sounds like you have been through a lot. Rough. I guess to say things can only get better, wouldn't help at all. I can say I'm glad you are expressing your feelings through poetry. You do it very well.-SEA
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-03-14 12:19 PM


Neala hon you are having a rough time of it aren't you?  It WILL get better with time, it really does...
If I were you fill your voids with stuff you love, learn something, try something new, take up celtic dancing ....    Something!
Also you have a great place to vent here in DP and DP is filled with people who care.
*hugs*

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-14 06:17 PM


Hi neala, nice to have you back posting...
I could really realte to this one...we go thru the same thing with the doctors and the drugs with my daughter...stay strong...
take care, jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



demonic~angel
Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54
Kansas
4 posted 2000-03-15 10:23 PM


OMG!! That spoke to me so much...It touched me...It reminded me of my own hosptilization...you found the words to express your experience more than I could ever do...Wonderfully written...

 Carpe Diem...

Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
5 posted 2000-03-16 08:43 PM


Hello,
I am glad someone can relate. I felt kinda crazy writing this but that is ok now. I like to be a little mental.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

6 posted 2000-03-17 10:21 AM


I know insanity...it has been my companion for some time now.

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

I'll be here...why? I'll
be waiting...for what?
'll be waiting for you
so...if you come here,
you'll find me...

I promise.

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