The sadness of watching yourself

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Anthony
Junior Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 12

0 posted 2000-03-13 11:12 AM

Seeing someone,yourself,
from outside makes the world seem a bigger place,
Loking as your beat plays around the room,
Watching as someone finds you, in tears
the person is distraught, your life will never be,
theres, the same again

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

1 posted 2000-03-13 12:04 PM

first let me say welcome! i enjoyed your poem. it often takes stepping outside of yourself to really see the whole picture. i completely agreed with your first two lines. anyway- looking forward to more of your work.

i love too much, and not enough.

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

2 posted 2000-03-13 12:51 PM

WELCOME to passion

i think it's a good one for it has a point of view that most of us tend to look sometimes .Hope to see more of your work in the future....

welcome again

demonic~angel
Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 54
Kansas

3 posted 2000-03-13 12:57 PM

Welcome to Passions great to have you here...Awesome poem...Great point of view...your poetry speaks to me....

Carpe Diem...

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

4 posted 2000-03-13 01:12 PM

welcome, welcome... very nice, judging by this short work, i am looking forward to reading more.
jannel

"I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-03-13 04:01 PM

hi and add my welcome to the list.
lots of emotion expressed in a few words,
nicely done
take care, jm

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

6 posted 2000-03-13 04:49 PM

Welcome to Dark Passions Anthony! This was so strong...atleast for me because I relate to it so very well. You did a great job and I hope to see more from you.
Yours truly,
Angel

"The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~

Anthony
Junior Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 12

7 posted 2000-03-13 05:07 PM

Thanks to everyone that replied. it was the first time that i have ever shown any poetry so i was really worried that you would all hate it, cheers.

ill_tactics
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 149

8 posted 2000-03-13 07:48 PM

Spoken by a true poet, Nice work. Hope to see more of your name in the forum. Much love, One love, PEACE

sonjes
Senior Member

since 2000-02-18

Posts 564
North Carolina

9 posted 2000-03-13 07:51 PM

Big welcome, Anthony. May I say quite an original poem you have here. Coongrats on "coming out."

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

10 posted 2000-03-14 11:46 AM

hello from walter

Welcome to the darkness

In here we hold the bitter cold
Here are we who stand with power in hand
Holding beauty and holding truth
Before the tide because its bitter outside

Did you write the Book of Love
And do you have faith in God above
If the Bible tells you so
Do you believe in rock 'n roll
Can music save your mortal soul
And can you teach me how to dance real slow

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