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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Sleep brings strange dreams And other thoughts of incomprehension Mixture of darkness and light Colors and sound Things that should never be And things that always will Take these thoughts from my head Don’t be scared, don’t be aware Don’t be alarmed frightened child I don’t want to be king of the world I don’t want to be prince of anything No harm behind my smile I won’t ever do that thing No, I won’t ever say those words That cut you like a knife Such a shame Denial can be such a part of you And this is the time to choose No malice behind my smile What I give, I give to you What I want, you could never do Today is the day I tore my soul out Burned my eyes upon the sight Of my own face Such a shame, The truth behind my smile |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
it's full of emotion that makes you wonder what does a person really think since we have no idea, it tend to scare us from time to time ..... well done ... good work JML  [This message has been edited by CrEaTuRe (edited 03-13-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Take these thoughts from my head Don’t be scared, don’t be aware Don’t be alarmed frightened child I don’t want to be king of the world I don’t want to be prince of anything No harm behind my smile I won’t ever do that thing No, I won’t ever say those words That cut you like a knife Such a shame Denial can be such a part of you And this is the time to choose No malice behind my smile What I give, I give to you What I want, you could never do Today is the day I tore my soul out Burned my eyes upon the sight Of my own face Such a shame, The truth behind my smile ---------------- wow...a lot here to read between the lines on...very emotional deep piece... lots of questions come up in this one... intriging yes...  stalking you still, jm |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ ok..I have no idea what this was about, I'm not even going to tell you what it made me think of......... Any way you said it very well.-SEA |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
another great one JML. this one spoke to me!! inspired me i think im gonna go write sometyhing. thanks!! aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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