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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
My feelings inside me. They don't escape. Hate I feel for you. My soul aches to be filled. My mouth don't speak the words that I feel. No one seems to care. Fire surges through my looking for an escape. I try to speak but no one listens. Anger towards him. I don't understand any more. Is it my fault? Did I cause this? I feel so empty. I struggle within. Did I seal your coffin? I feel like I killed you. Do I need to seal my own coffin? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It's easy to blame ourselves for what's gone wrong. . . but sometimes, we do that because we don't know what else to do. . . Deeply sad words. . . they really spoke to me. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
very sad ... I don't think that anyone can be blamed for the actions of another, influenced maybe but in the end it is our own decision to decide which path we take... ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
deep and sad indeed. when left with little or no answers, it is easy to blame one's self. i love too much, and not enough. |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Dont blame yourself, blame it on the rain...hahaha Not meaning to make fun, just to cheer u up. Great poem, hope to see more of your writing. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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Anthony Junior Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 12 |
I think i know what you are going through, it dont get better but it gets easier and isnt that all we can hope for. Sorry to be depressing, powerful poem |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DA~ this is very sad. I agree with Sven.-SEA |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
demonic~angel this one touched my heart but remember that never blame ourself for what happens when all was meant to be and the god is not on our side all the time ... just live life the with the best in mind........ take care dear........ |
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