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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Are you deaf or can't you hear~ I thought I made myself quite clear Are you blind or can't you see~ these walls I've built to protect me Are you numb or can't you feel~ this pain in my heart is very real Are you cold or just made of ice~ and here I thought you were so nice Am I dumb or just stupid~ to believe in love brought by Cupid. -SEA- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you ask all the right questions SEA, great poem...i liked the repetative theme thru out it...jm you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ I was really very pissed last night. It didn't last long though!  Thanks for reading.-SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I can hear ya...your anger shows through loud and clear. Well done! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sounds to me like you were fighting the realization that no matter what you say or do, you'll fall in love. Good poem. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
my dear sea, i liked this very much i have a few that i need to share with you. mo. |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Am I dumb or just stupid~ to believe in love brought by Cupid. I've asked myself this a couple thousand times but i gues under all the walls and barriers my heart is a hopeless romantic ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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