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~Haunted Heart~...for Michael
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~Haunted Heart~...for Michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
**inspired by your poems and replies to mine... by the things we both understand when reading between the lines... as always I thank you for the inspiration, with respect and friendship...janet marie ~preface~... Deep with in my broken heart... hides the death of all my dreams. Defines the need I have for love, kept silent, choking on my screams... (Exsisting in the Darkness)... Damaged and denied... reflections of a childhood left behind, In remembrance of lost innocence, memories return to relive and remind. Generations of humiliation... inherited practices of pain. Legacy designed by sin, all dressed up in denial...the shame remains. (Living in the Light) Searching for acceptance... Sanctuary to heal and live, A guiding light is realized... Redemption grants a second chance...to again love and forgive. Believing in the light that shines ... both from within and from above, Learning to find self worth and respect... and to never give up on the gifts unconditional love. Janet Marie you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ this is beautiful.-SEA |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
beautiful!!!! ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
dang it...I was gonna try to sneak out of here tonight gracefully and then you post this. Oh, this is "me" in every aspect of the word. You've moved me to near tears. Thank you for such an "all-knowing, all-understanding" tribute. I am deeply deeply touched. Michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
M, you are most welcome... thank you for understanding... what are the chances of this..timing is everything(smile) I just love poetic fate...  have a FUN trip...ENJOY jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful Janet. "Deep within my broken heart hides the death of all my dreams". A very appropriate title. James |
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atslanta Junior Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 13 |
Believing in the light that shines ... both from within and from above JM, Wonderful poem, it touched me several times and I believe that the "light that shines both from within and above" will be my saving grace. I thoroughly enjoyed this and I look forward to seeing more of you. Atslanta |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
JanetMarie, Glad you did this for Michael he needed the burst of positives. Loved the whole thing, the tribute, the writing and even the title pulled me in. Well done  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Isis just said it all for me. Wonderful poem J.M. Take a bow girl. You deserve it. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is very precious and beautiful... I love the way you have structured this, Janet Marie. K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Very moving poem. Michael must be happy to have a special friend like you, also flattered that you wrote one for him like this. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Janet... You never cease to amaze me girl. Once again I am in awe of a piece of your work. You got true talent, never forget it. This was simply beautiful, elegant, and did extreme poetic justice to a wonderful person. I admire you both VERY much, and love reading your work! AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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