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Before the Shame
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Before the Shame |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Empty inside So cold inside This guilt, this pleasure I’ve been meaning to hide Can’t see What’s in front of me The grinding ice Passes so slowly Hallowed ground Unearthly sound After all the rotations, Still spinning ‘round Yesterday’s news Been abused After all the laughter, Still not amused That flame Still burns the same A moment of indifference, Before the shame |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Yesterday’s news Been abused After all the laughter, Still not amused That flame Still burns the same A moment of indifference, Before the shame" well, I relate to this one... perfect rhyme and flow... I like the line..."this guilt, this pleasure. stalking you still, jm you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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