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~*Cemetery Calling*~
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~*Cemetery Calling*~ |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas 
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Secrets whispering in the trees Mysteries flying on the breeze Rows of cold hard unmoving stone Names and dates are all thats known Mothers, fathers, brothers, sisters, aunts, uncles, friends The list goes on and on the list never ends So many unanswered questions, so much history Knowing that a stone will someday be me Silenced forever, nothing more to say Beautifully tragic, it moves me in this way -*- ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
this piece made me want to not be just a stone when i die. it made me want to make sure my life is remembered and i am remembered as more than just a stone. nice piece. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Interesting observation. I guess a stone is what waits all of us. "What's significant? only the quality of the journey". Nice piece you have written. Makes one think about the inevitable. [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-09-2000).] |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
"Knowing that a stone will someday be me" This is a great observation of the fatality of life and the wish to be remembered. Great approach to this subject. Jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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