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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Swimming What happens if I am swept off my feet? Off the cliff I stand on and pushed into the ocean Who says I want to swim? Who says you won't drowned me? Yet I like the shallow pools where I can foretell who deep my love goes Monsters hide in the ocean you drag me into Will you protect me? Will you tell me? Drownding is such a depressing ending to my story Being eaten alive is never plesant either Living may be my fatel end... Deep dark and dangerous is what I tread in Lift me up dark knight Make the moon stop its pull...making the beautiful dagers that keep precious air from my grasp Love me dark knight...keep me safe from the portraite you leave me in... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Keli1019 Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31FL |
This poem was beautiful...It has so much emotion behind it and I can relate to it, because that's how I used to feel about ***** I don't care if everyone knows now.  That's besides the point....Great poem and I can't wait to read your next one. I hope one day HE tells you how he feels.... "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone." |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Sorry to dissapoint you Keli but there is no HE...as in nobody would know this HE...Belive it or not...I have not told a soul about him...I am not planning on talking about him for...a while... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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