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The Jackal
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-03-07 12:04 PM


hand on the soul
dripping with anger
and sadness untold
speaking for hours
to an empty,dirty room
building the loss
feeling  everything
in bright bold relief
the tomb is the world
leave a little sanity
everywhere
heaven in an eye
rigid....jaded
until the day we die..

© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
1 posted 2000-03-07 12:52 PM


such depth in so few words. very well done!
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-03-07 06:31 PM


I second danni's words...very deep, and dark...powerful emotions as well.jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie


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