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Dark Poetry #1

Please go Away

Andreja Nikki
Junior Member

since 2000-03-06

Posts 18

0 posted 2000-03-06 10:01 PM

I am so tired,
Sleep comes easy,
But never leaves me fully satisfied,
I am searching for something more.

As I lay my head to rest I still think of you,
Memories of your love invade my mind,
I can remember everything so clearly,
And miss it so much.

So I am still searching for you,
Or am I looking for something greater?
Will my thougths of you stop when I find what I am looking for?
Will you ever just go away?
Please just go away.

hailfellow
Junior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 28

1 posted 2000-03-06 10:06 PM

Gosh, you nailed it on the head. You convey my feelings very well. (APPLAUSE) I'm looking forward to reading some more of your stuff in the future. Nice job!

hailfellow
"If life had no sense and I had to choose nonsense, then I too should consider this the most sensible nonsense."
~Nietzsche

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2000-03-07 04:14 PM

Oh how I relate to this..... It's agonizing to have that haunting always be there.... to feel that need and yet wish to God you didn't. Great poem. Welcome to Dark Passions.

michael

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