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Andreja Nikki
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since 2000-03-06
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0 posted 2000-03-06 08:40 PM


....And then the darkness comes,
Shrouding me in fear and uncertainty,
I turn to you, but you are gone,
The comfort comes in pain.

© Copyright 2000 Andreja Nikki - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-07 02:22 PM


A few words with such strong meaning.
short, simple, and effective.
Well done.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-03-07 04:02 PM


I have felt those times when my only comfort was my pain.  James
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-07 06:49 PM


The comfort comes in pain.


so true, so very true...nicely stated. jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie


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