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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-03-06 06:35 AM



'Pon the white charger
Lady Lamp rides fair
Peppered daffodils in golden hair
Poppy petals line the road
While milk white shoulders hold no load
flowing form Summers ghost
floating haunting paradise coast
Scented winds remember her breath
that gave life to the night sweet Arabeth
And pretty memories days grown old
speak of her still, The woman of gold


  Did you write the Book of Love
And do you have faith in God above
If the Bible tells you so
Do you believe in rock 'n roll
Can music save your mortal soul
And can you teach me how to dance real slow


© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-06 07:06 PM


WOW walter...this is gorgeous...you painted a portrait with this one!!!! I love this poem!! jm


                    

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie


star83
Junior Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 26
SD
2 posted 2000-03-06 08:00 PM


Wonderful imagery and good alliteration. Liked it all..

 "True love is like a
ghost; everybody talks
about it but few have
seen it."
La Rochefoucauld

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2000-03-07 04:10 PM


Excellent poem, Walter....love the imagery.


Michael

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