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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-03-03 06:24 PM


Sitting here all alone
Wanting to be close
Knowing how far you are
I simply wanna be close
To something that I can't have

When I get scared
I am alone
Knowone to care
Knowone to save
Someone help me
I need out
Give me a hand
Don't leave me alone

But as I am alone
My little world
Comes un-done
A slowly fall apart
Into shattered pieces
Standing here alone
Wanting to share my pain
But I stay alone
For the better of the world

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

© Copyright 2000 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-03-03 09:05 PM


Your poems are always so sad, how can you being alone, be for the good of the world?  I'm beginning to think you are to critical of yourself hon....  Still the poem was well done as always  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-03-04 12:36 PM


Neala, This is a nice piece, even though sad.
I think you have a good writing skill.  Look forward to more of your work.

Rosalind Palafox
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Member
Posts 88

3 posted 2000-03-06 07:34 PM


I like your poem. Where do u usually post your poems? Let me know. I like to read sad poetry.

 "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 2000-03-07 04:06 PM


Neala, I may not speak for the world but Dark Passions is certainly a better place with you in it.  I hope you will continue to share your work with us.  


Michael

Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
5 posted 2000-03-10 08:10 PM


Thanks everyone I am glad you liked the poem I normally post in here.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

ill_tactics
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

6 posted 2000-03-11 08:36 PM


tears, I hate the feelings of lonliness, but I live life alone, with not even my shadow to follow.  Nice poem.  Much love, One love, PEACE
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