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Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-03-03 06:16 PM


One simple thought
Can make me remember
All that was
All was lost
That is foever gone
As I feel
My life slip away
The one that I trust
Falls out of reach
So the one that
Was with me threw it all
It forever gone

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

© Copyright 2000 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-03 07:13 PM


yeah, Neala is back  
this is sadly beautiful, as are all of yours...thus..your are the goddess(smile)...
emotionally perfect poem Neala, glad your posting again.take care, janet marie

 When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger...
And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool
So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger
While the loneliness seems to spring from your life
Like a fountain from a pool.

Jackson Browne


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-03-03 08:52 PM


So sad how we FEEL this way, but reality is slightly different again.  Welcome back and top marks!  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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