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Another heart lies bleeding
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Another heart lies bleeding |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
it cut deep That you did to me Into my heart shockeded i reel All around New fell snow Now nowhere For i to go My heart is cold Lieing bleeding in ice and snow I see your face Why do this This that hurts So deep in me I am lost Still your here Still your face Haunting my days am i alone in your cememtary In which i lie Or am i one of many lieing in icey graves It hurt so As i have to watch As i see you leave and go Hear me again Remove this icey pain I will be yours again But here i am and now Another heart lies bleeding Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
great work. one of many in a long line of broken hearts. not all women have, as you say, a cematary of broken hearts. great picture though. aimee  Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"in your cememtary In which i lie Or am i one of many lieing in icey graves -------------- Remove this icey pain I will be yours again But here i am and now Another heart lies bleeding" very sad Walter, but well written and the emotions shine through. I too like the line about the cemetary of broken hearts...creative anology.jm When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger... And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger While the loneliness seems to spring from your life Like a fountain from a pool. Jackson Browne |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful analagy of the graveyard of broken hearts, I don't have one of them either. Loved this Walter May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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