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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
windows are doors to things we cannot share the eyes to my soul long for your presence there effortless crys hopelessly fall on deaf ears thoughts of painful goodbyes paralyzing come the tears raging with anger fills the emptyness inside sheds light on dark corners where loneliness hides< !signature--> Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica [This message has been edited by devinmaria (edited 03-03-2000).] |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
can anyone tell me how to edit please. nevermind, i figured it out. lol. guess i just wasnt looking hard enough. reply away!!!< !signature--> Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica [This message has been edited by devinmaria (edited 03-03-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
windows are doors to things we cannot share the eyes to my soul long for your presence there devin, this is a beautiful poem, with perfect rhyme flow and the emotions are expressed beautifully. very nice work. jm When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger... And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger While the loneliness seems to spring from your life Like a fountain from a pool. Jackson Browne |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
thank you JM. you alwyas have such nice things to say and im glad you enjoyed my poem. thank you so much for your encouragement. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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