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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
confessions and obsessions regrets and faults tears and laughter these four walls feelings and anger sadness and thoughts poetry in the making these four walls hatred and compassion love and it's loss confusion and madness these four walls lonely and questioning rising and falls empty and lonely these four white walls rage and impulses lonely i crawl outlined on the floor with four white walls Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well done hon. Hope you venture out from those four walls soon  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow, this is powerful and expressive. very well written, I like the continuing theme running thru it. jm When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger... And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger While the loneliness seems to spring from your life Like a fountain from a pool. Jackson Browne |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Oh my! The pictures in my head of a person writhing in a room with nothing but her emotions. How incredibly graphic you have made this for me. Powerful! With such simple phrases and single words, you have created something strong. |
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