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~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-03-01 06:06 PM


Bear with me...off the top of my head!

My wings are unfolding
It's time for me to fly away
But I don't want to leave
The love I've found today
I wish I could stay
But it seems they want me to go
So my love,
I am now on earth,
But wish to be with you soon.


 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

I'll be here...why? I'll
be waiting...for what?
'll be waiting for you
so...if you come here,
you'll find me...

I promise.

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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-03-01 07:35 PM


So sad, no matter what I will never be eager to die, no matter who is in heaven waiting...
This was beautiful and from the heart though.  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Keli1019
Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31
FL
2 posted 2000-03-01 09:29 PM


This poem is so sad!   You have ALOT of talent to be able to write such a great poem off the top of your head.
I agree with Isis...I'll never be eager to die no matter who's in heaven waiting, although many close friends and family who I miss a WHOLE lot have passed away.
I'm starting to cry now, so I"ll leave this at that.....

~Kelly~  


 "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a
day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone."

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