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TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-03-01 05:15 PM



Feeling for what I am
Leaning towards who you are I lift my wings and float up into the air
Never saying good-bye is a prayier that I turn to
Loving, losing is the repeating process that I so fortell
Although I wish I could love you my heart is not open
The beauty of hope lights the dark night in a way that is more than blinding
The revolting face of hatred is not close to what I repete
I will never know the future of my doomed heart it is not occupied...but it was never well mended
The stich of your love may be enough


 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-03-01 07:33 PM


The stich of your love??  Sorry I don't get the last line in this.  Explain please ?  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Keli1019
Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31
FL
2 posted 2000-03-01 09:24 PM


This poem really hits home....Especially how I feel right now...I started to allow myself to fall in love again, but then my heart closed up again..but, I think I may be opening up my heart once again.
~Kelly~  

 "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a
day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone."

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-03-03 12:27 PM


"The beauty of hope lights the dark night"
This was the best line I think.

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