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Whats the diffence b/w me and him?
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
.Hi..b4 u guys read....(if u read  ))i want u all to know that this is not actually a poem....and is completely raw!I could not alter it ...otherwise it would have been worst! What's the difference between me and him ? He shows his anger through burning and killing Mine is burning inside me with me , rousing me to madness, Hs wrath is in front of us ,with so many dead, Mine is inside me, with me who's dying, He hates for what the world has done to him, I hate for what I have done to myself, Love means nothing to him for it never existed in his world, I don't love because I never got it , it did exist, He's greedy because he never got what he wanted I m greedy 'cause of what I want. He's selfish because he's got nothing to care for. I m selfish because I have no one who cares for me, He's virtually dead , because he has got no one to live for. I m dead because I was killed by my own fate! He's a criminal in front of the world, I m a criminal in my own eyes, in my own world, He was never happy , he was born cursed, I was happy once , but it soon died He killed his loved ones for what they did to him I killed mine , for what I could do to them He has no one , he was born to hate. I have no one 'cause hate was born with me So we both stand on the same path , Hoping someday we'll meet and care! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Gosh how to respond? He doesn't sound very good to me, a violent sob actually... Hope this is just a fantasy type man, not one in your life??? Sorry I really don't know what to say.. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
Hey ISIS...this poem is not bout my bf or anything !Guess u missed the idea behind it When i was writing this poem i was actually realting my insecurities with a person whos a criminal in the eye of this world ..Hell i don even know how to expalin it! faith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
faith, I dont know about explaining it but I like it!! I think I got your intent... and thats the point!!(smile)jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... Jackson Browne *I miss you baby... I love you...always. |
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