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I Don't Think So, Friend!!

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BSC
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0 posted 02-29-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for BSC

So you say that we will still be friends -
As long as it's all your way
You care about nothing, but what you want
Well, I have a few things to say --

I'm not here as a convenience for you,
When there's nobody else to be found
I've got better things to do with my time,
Than to wait till you come around

You've judged me far more than you had any right
You've not walked one step in my shoes,
And until the day you have been where I've been
I'll not worry about paying your dues.

You felt that you could hurt me
Said such mean and hurtful things
For thirteen years, I did all I could
And this is what your friendship brings.

So, I'll hand it all right back to you,
I don't need these crumbs you'll share
Take your offerings somewhere else
I no longer care if you're there.

© Copyright 2000 Bonnie Church - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 02-29-2000 04:25 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

way to tell em BSC!!!(smile)  sounds like this person needed a good reality check... great job..perfect declaration of moving on...JM

 You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name
And know my love and my desperation were one and the same...
Baby it's alright...
Take this pain and all this sadness
It's alright
Take this rain
You're going to be free...
Jackson Browne
*I love you baby*


Aimster
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2 posted 02-29-2000 04:57 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~BSC~
You go!!! Hell yes, my sentiments exactly! I have been having major problems with a so called friend of mine as well. And I have come to the same conclusion as you, time to move on! Great poem!! thanks for sharing.

amy  


 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
BSC
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3 posted 02-29-2000 05:54 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

Janet Marie & Aimster - Thanks, boy I needed that, doubt if she will get it though....Oh well, better days are coming...
blueyz75
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4 posted 02-29-2000 07:33 PM       View Profile for blueyz75   Email blueyz75   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit blueyz75's Home Page   View IP for blueyz75

Sounds like something I said to someone who used me, only I said it in my heart because they weren't worth the breath!  It was a long time coming but finally worth it.

kelly


 I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman

Isis
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5 posted 03-01-2000 06:21 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Good on you Hon!!  Half the time I think people say that just to be polite, they have no intention of being friends, OR they just want to rub it in a bit!!  Glad to see you strong  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


JamesMichael
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6 posted 03-01-2000 06:57 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Exactly the way I feel about a situation that has been going on for a few years now and has hopefully come to a conclusion in the past few weeks.   And I have come to the conclusion that I can live without her, so why would I want to live with her. james
devinmaria
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7 posted 03-01-2000 09:11 AM       View Profile for devinmaria   Email devinmaria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit devinmaria's Home Page   View IP for devinmaria

been there and done that.  you are better of if you move on ya know.  whoever it is that is bringing you down isnt worth it, thats what ive realized anyways.  you have to be strong and be firm in what you want out of friendships.  dont be anyones door mat, ive been that for too damn long.  thanks for sharing.

aimee


 Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica
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8 posted 03-01-2000 12:17 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

BSC~ ouch! I felt your anger. Sometimes people can be jerks. Great poem.-SEA
BSC
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9 posted 03-01-2000 01:42 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

Thanks everyone for your responses.....Now all I need is the nerve to say it.....
JOY 14
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10 posted 03-02-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

I know exactly how you feel.  I just lost a friendship with a long time friend.  Posted a poem on it too just now, and now I read your poem.  Hang in there.  I know how you feel.  

Joy
monte
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11 posted 06-22-2000 05:47 PM       View Profile for monte   Email monte   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for monte

OH BSC, what she did to you, remember, there will always be someone else to be there for you and you know who she is!!!
 
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