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My illiosion/delelusion of happiness
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My illiosion/delelusion of happiness |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Your words came flowing like rain on a summer night Refreashing and peacful yet not enough I joy in what you state...but some part of me wants more than just the simple words Some inner illiosion of happyness? Thats my only thought I cannot want love... I scared to posses it I may want it but...just like that sharp knife which I could end it all with I would not dare go near Just like that I shall prevail over who...what I want You cannot understand me anyway You are not deserving But that inner delision is so strong Like a thousand rocks flowing through my veins...all blocking the same passage "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Honey I loved this but the spelling is awol. Illusion and delusion, you may like to edit this. Sorry I'm not picking, helping remember that!!  I really enjoyed this.. the feelings, the lessons May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~tan, really liked how the ideas of this flowed together...this worked for me keep up the great work, and as always thanks for sharing.amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Keli1019 Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31FL |
As always, another great piece! I loved this one. It had so much feeling, and truth in it. I know exactly where you're coming from. "You are not deserving But that inner delision is so strong" I loved that line! It's so true....Keep writing! I can't wait to read more!! "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone." |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Illusions, delusions, life's full o' them. But I guess we must keep going in order to, hopefully, come across a better place. PS- Check your speeling! ^_^ ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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