Ballad of the ice king Pt3 Into the dark lands

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Ballad of the ice king Pt3 Into the dark lands

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2000-02-28 06:56 AM

Over the years the ice king
Old beyonds the hills
Journey the many lands
For his heart fulfill

As he walked the highlands
Accross the great dales
He came upon a great gate
Which the stones unveiled

The great gate stood a colossus
In the dark even fall
three times the width of ice king
And twenty times as tall

He reached up his great hand
And Pounded at the stone
It opened to the ringing
Of his icey flesh and bone

Before him stood the dark lands
That Exist beneath the seas
Where rule the dark lords
Nemesis to you and me

Great dangers await in darkness
Into which the ice king fell
Yet he wears the danger lightly
As he tumbles into the pits of hell

Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-28 12:39 PM

Before him stood the dark lands
That Exist beneath the seas
Where rule the dark lords
Nemesis to you and me

Great dangers await in darkness
Into which the ice king fell
Yet he wears the danger lightly
As he tumbles into the pits of hell"

Walter, this is excellent...you and isis are very good at keeping these continuing themes going...and thats not easy to do...this one should be your first(?) novel...
take care, janet marie

She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it.
Matchbox20

I love you baby... always.*

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-02-28 06:12 PM

Bravo Walter, me wants more................

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2000-03-04 11:38 PM

Yes, it seems I'm missing out on a great story here....more...more...more
You got me hooked, especially now you mentioned the Highlands !

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