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ill_tactics
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 149


0 posted 2000-02-25 05:59 PM


I saw you and you did me,
we smiled and then hugged,
I smelled your sweet scent,
flashbacks of your letters of love,
I couldnt believe you were there,
right before my eyes,
The man I admired so much,
I felt so shy and nervous,
but somethin told me not to,
You told me "I love you"
and my heart loved you back,
you said you didn't care,
but something told me you did,
straight through your eyes,
I could see your soul,
my friends couldn't understand,
but I told them otherwise,
did they know something I didn't,
how did they know what was coming,
you said you loved me for me,
I was so blind I could not see,
now you say you love to be free,
like a bird soaring in the sky,
I try to hide my tears,
but the eyes cannot hide,
exactly what you feel inside,
Tell me was it something I did,
love is what I gave,
that's all I had,
you gave me smiles,
you gave me tears,
you gave me love,
now all I have is fear.

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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-25 06:22 PM


So sad Ill Tactics.  Now you NEED some COURAGE to get on with your life. *HUGS*

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-25 10:22 PM


you really express the emotions of this time very well. nice work...hang in there(smile)
janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


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