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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Today. . . the distance is hard. . . It's like standing in front of an exploding window And feeling every shard. Today. . . I didn't wake up in your arms. . . It's like being a little lost child Wondering if he'll be kept safe from harm. Today. . . I wondered if you were okay. . . It's like a cloud that hangs over me And takes the sunshine away. Today. . . I haven't heard your song. . . It's a slience, cold and dead And for the music my heart longs. Today. . . I love you even more. . . It's like being born again My heart going through that new door. ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Inspirational poem, for me anyway. I seem to draw a kind of hope from your ending. Beautiful work, Sven. michael |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you Michael. . . today, hope is all that I have. . . Glad that it could speak to you. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sven...how nice to have you here... this poem is sadly beautiful...I was touched by its emotions... "Today. . . I wondered if you were okay. . . It's like a cloud that hangs over me And takes the sunshine away." sad and sweet...I relate to this one very well these days... well, they say misery loves company...and were all here(smile) take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing Sven from a heart in love. I hope for the best for you. James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It'll work out hon, have hope. Beautiful poem as always, a longing soul, nothing nicer  *HUGS*May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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