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moshpit
Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 143
cebu, philippines

0 posted 2000-02-25 04:48 AM

Nothing will be the same
I know that now.
It will be hard, I guess
But I have to go on somehow.

The days seemed happier
When you were still alive.
The laughter, more heartfelt.

Funny, it is
how a drab world
could have color because of thee
how a boring day
could ever possess meaning,
if not immortality.

The nights will seem colder,
even lonelier, I know.
The day might be difficult,
even empty.

But things don't look bleak anymore
As much as it used to be.
I'm no longer just a speck of mankind
But also of humanity.

[This message has been edited by moshpit (edited 02-25-2000).]

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

1 posted 2000-02-25 01:32 PM

A wonderful piece here, mosh. I have known a few influences like this. A wonderful gift they give.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-25 04:13 PM

mosh, this is emotionally excellent...and perfect! I love the ending lines. very nice work
take care,janet marie

...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-02-25 06:14 PM

Wonderful emotional work, touching on you and the bigger picture. Well done

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

blueyz75
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 138
IL

4 posted 2000-02-26 07:33 PM

Describes the view of the world I saw after a friend of mine committed suicide. Along with all the anger and rage there was that.

Kelly

I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

5 posted 2000-02-26 07:59 PM

Wow!! In a few words you have expressed very well the pain that results from loss and the wonderful human ability to go on, even when we at first don't believe we can. The people in our lives supply the color to our world. A beautiful poem!!!

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