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Lady Bere
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since 2000-02-03
Posts 73
Valmeyer, Illinois USA

0 posted 2000-02-23 10:37 PM


The Passing

To thee the blessing comes at last
In reverent night of moments past.
The look of peace upon your face
That evening hour's final grace.
Sleep deep sweet prince in morning's light
Let life give its last delight.
Air, Fire, Water, Earth.
Protect thee as you leaveā€¦.



 Without darkness there is no light
Without the light we cannot see the dark
Balance...It heals the soul -- by: LB



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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-23 11:36 PM


Lady B...
this is equisite...very touching...gracefully written.
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-24 12:49 PM


Slightly Wiccan and beautiful to boot!!!  
I really enjoyed this  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Lady Bere
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73
Valmeyer, Illinois USA
3 posted 2000-02-24 07:05 PM


Thank you both Janet Marie and Isis for your kind words.  It means alot to me.
Sasikat
Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
4 posted 2000-02-24 10:09 PM


What a beautiful tribute to the one who passed. Although it speaks to most, of what is a frightening thing, you make the experience sound very peaceful.
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