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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Here is where my hate hits the sea There is where my eyes are level with the stars When is where my lips brush yours Time is where you can never be told the deep Sound is where I can hear whats left of your fading voice Touch is where my hand feels yours so close Sometimes is where I know you Always is where I'll promise you Whenever is where I'll keep you Love is what I'll teach you... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Wonderful use of parallels. I really really really liked this. jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
another great one TA...well written. good work. take care,janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great work!! Strong thoughts here, good to see!!  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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