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Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

0 posted 2000-02-21 01:45 PM


hi yall,
well it has been awhile but i am posting a new poem  *yeah*  this poem is dedicated to isis and all of my friends.  i hope yall like it.  i know i enjoyed writing.  tell me what yall think.  thanks  

SUNSET

As I watch the sunset
My mind starts to wander
Thoughts in my head
I begin to ponder
I think about the past
And all the fun we had
All theese memories are coming back
And making me sad
I remember all the nights
All the parties and raisin hell
Would we get cought?
Only time would tell
A close circle of friends
We are closer then family
Words just can't express
What yall mean to me
When ever I needed a shoulder to cry on
Yall were always there
Even if I woke ya up in the middle of the night
You wouldnt even care
Tears form in my eyes
When I think of what I had back then
I pray to the lord above
That I can have that back again
But now I am so far from home
And I dont know what to do
I just wish I could come back home
And be with all of you.......

Jesse C. Jaymz


 Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel is just a frieght train coming your way...
MetallicA

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-21 01:55 PM


Jesse..this is SO GREAT!!!.and so is having you back posting with us!!
this is a very sweet emotional and memory filled expression...and a lovely dedication to our sweet Isis...
great job...and remember...no matter how far away we are...this place is always close to home...take care, janet marie

 Now for me some words come easy...
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch.
You never knew what I loved in you--
I don't know what you loved in me...
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be...
How long have I been sleeping-
How long have I been drifting alone through the night...
How long have I've dreaming I could make it right...
If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might
To be the one you need...
Jackson Browne



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-21 10:17 PM


Jess hon this is beautiful, thankyou!   Just remember home is where the heart is.  Passions and the friendships made here and precious and we are all so lucky.
Glad you are posting again, and thanks again for the lovely tribute poem.  Much love  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
3 posted 2000-02-22 08:07 AM


thanks yall.  i'm glad that you all liked it.  isis if home is where the heart is then my home is at the beach.     janet thank you too for your reply.  this place is a home for us tourched and wayward souls to come and share things that  others seem strange.  but when your here it is normal.  and i love that!!!!!  and this place is not only close to home, but it is also very close to my heart as well......

 Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel is just a frieght train coming your way...
MetallicA

JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
4 posted 2000-02-22 06:28 PM


I know what you mean Jesse J.!  I love this place too!  I think we would all would miss this place if we left.  It is really a home away from home don't you think?

Joy

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-02-22 08:30 PM


Jesse, I know what you mean about the beach, I'd live there too if I could.  Maybe one day..  I have found the perfect haven for myself Maleny which combines rolling green hills and pastures (ie One Tree Hill) and a short drive to the sea.  Couldn't ask for more, except living directly on the beach, but who can afford that real estate!!  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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