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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-02-17 08:30 PM


You have already taken so much,
You took my unborn daughter,
She never ever knew me,
Never felt my loving touch.

You've taken friends and family,
A beloved uncle of mine,
Now you threaten to take my Dad,
Haven't I already served my time?

You keep coming back,
To shatter my fragile cocoon,
You'll probably take someone else,
Before the next full moon.

What did I do to deserve this?
Why single out me?
I found myself, found happiness,
Why can't you leave me be?

I survived all previous hard times,
And for that I'm a better soul,
I don't need any more improving,
But again you want to take control.

Am I doomed to live this unhappiness,
Over and over again,
Who will you take next,
My son, my husband, my friend?

I've only just survived my past,
The last 3 years so hard,
Perhaps you will not rest,
Until I am in that graveyard.

Such short lived happiness,
Another vicious stab,
But I'm here to tell you this,
You won't succeed in your grab.

I'll always be here,
I'll fight back hard and longer,
For those in my life that I love,
Of them I couldn't be fonder.

You may knock me down,
But I can promise you this,
You won't succeed this time,
You won't steal my moments of bliss.

With all the powers of love in my heart,
I shall live to battle another day,
You will never win here with me,
Go find someone else and make them pay.
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 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)




[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 02-17-2000).]

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-17 09:01 PM


beautiful poem of defiance Isis...
stay stong sweets!!
janet marie

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-17 09:12 PM


Thanks Janet Marie that is what I am trying to do!! (HUGS)  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



The Haunted Poet
Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 37
Sumner Washington
3 posted 2000-02-17 09:17 PM


Wow.... This poem is just.... WOW! I can truly say I really like this poem! Stay strong and keep up the defiance! And keep on writing, you're a natural!
Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
4 posted 2000-02-17 11:21 PM


Hold on, and love while you can. Those things which we cnnot save must be savored instead. COntinue to defy the unjustness of life. Much love,
Jannel

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-02-17 11:29 PM


Thanks Haunted Poet and Jannel, I will weaken at times, sure, but I will always fight for what I want or deserve or need, especially loved ones.  
Glad you liked this so much Haunted poet  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
6 posted 2000-02-18 11:23 AM


You have a strong heart.  Your spirit will hold up through this I'm sure.  Just hold on!

Joy

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-02-20 06:02 PM


Thanks Joy I can only try  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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