navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » Hope
Dark Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic Hope Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-02-17 07:16 PM


**This is dedicated to my best friend who sometimes feels invisable--I love you! Never lose hope...**

You are my candle of hope
in a night of despair.
You are my forgiving death
in an unforgiving life.


 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

*She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd*

© Copyright 2000 ~Venus~ - All Rights Reserved
ill_tactics
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

1 posted 2000-02-17 07:42 PM


Interesting, so little words, yet a picture big enough for life.  I feel invisible sometimes, but I use it for the good and not the evil.  You are truly a good friend.  Much love, One love, PEACE
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 2000-02-17 07:44 PM


I have a good friend too who always keeps me inspired. I think that's because she has so much energy though.  

Joy

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-02-17 08:05 PM


Lovely little tribute.  Good friends, true friends are one of life's most precious gifts  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-02-17 08:13 PM


Venus...
this is perfect and precious...
what a kind gift for your friend...
glad to see your back posting!!
take care, janet marie

 "Bring it on baby what you getting into...
I swear at once it was the little things that mattered--
But it all seems true to you.
Say the hell with my name and say the hell with my picture...
but swear, for the one time you need me around.
And here I'll stand like it matters...
Only once love gets through then gets scattered by the rain...
But pain gives me the right to be unkind"...
Tabitha's Secret


TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
5 posted 2000-02-18 10:31 PM


  I think I was told who this was and I giggled but thats besides the point...it is a very good poem and this person though invisible is still in your life...

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » Hope

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary