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TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-17 06:49 PM




Little candle, will you light a way for me?
Carrying out the illisions of my heart
Keep the flame burning
Keep it close to my heart
Candle, your light keep it hard to see...
Making my love for you blind
Can you lift my broken wings?
Can you extend me to the stars?
I promise their not far...

P.S.- Alright the candle in this poem is a person. I do not LOVE them but I love them as family (sister)...and this person has always been there for me and yet I don't feel like they are letting me be there for them...


 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Farrell - All Rights Reserved
~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

1 posted 2000-02-17 07:13 PM


This is really sweet...

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

*She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd*

ill_tactics
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

2 posted 2000-02-17 07:14 PM


The stars are definately not far.  Nice little piece, I like it.  Much love, One love, PEACE
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-02-17 08:17 PM


We all have a special candle in our lives, cherish them.  Lovely piece  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-02-17 08:22 PM


T-Angel,
this is SO great...very sweet expression and dedication for your friend...I love the candle anology...good work!!
janet marie

 "Bring it on baby what you getting into...
I swear at once it was the little things that mattered--
But it all seems true to you.
Say the hell with my name and say the hell with my picture...
but swear, for the one time you need me around.
And here I'll stand like it matters...
Only once love gets through then gets scattered by the rain...
But pain gives me the right to be unkind"...
Tabitha's Secret


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