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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
GO AWAY BRIGHT AND BURSTING SUNSHINE I HAVE SHEEP TO COUNT MY HEART IS FEELING HEAVY THE PAIN AND THE SORROW MOUNT RAIN HIDES YOU WITH DARK CLOUDS WILL MY TEARS DO THE SAME I COULD FIND PEACE, REST, AND SILENCE IF YOU'DE JUST PLEASE GO AWAY YOU DRAIN ME OF MY WILL MAKE MY BLOOD FLOW HARDER, FASTER FILL ME WITH SUCH ENERGY YET YOU ONLY DELAY THIS DISASTER I BEG YOU NOT TO SHINE TODAY LET NOONE SEE ME WEEP ITS TIME FOR ME TO DREAM AWAY IN MY ETERNAL SLEEP Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i loved this. tis how i feel most days. great work. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I really like this one...perfect for Dark Passions...I love the line..."only delaying the disaster" great job! janet marie When you look in the mirror... Wish you were somebody else Just a perfect reflection You and no one else... Minutes run into hours Hours run into days You're still waiting for someone Who never ever came... Go and run through the hallways Find your way to the door You will end up like always Back where you were before... Then you look in the mirror Wish you were somebody else But it's still your reflection You and no one else... Guster |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
I've felt this way most of my life. There's alwayz clouds above my head no matter how sunny the day is. But I alwayz find myself smiling, oh well. Good to know that there's more who feel the same way I do. GOOD JOB! Much love, One love, PEACE |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
The last two lines seem pretty heavy. Open up those shades and let the sunshine in. Make your day happen your way! Good poem, Danny |
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