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Passnot
Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18


0 posted 2000-02-17 06:21 AM


Many times before has time told me
The harsh neccessity of my heart
Telling lies from lessons unlearned
Cold are the gates of hell

The dreams dreaming about me
Draining away from my serene sanity
I will not be taken from heaven's gate
Reality invokes more broken promises

Adoring perfection crumbles after all
Wishful thoughts could never be spoiled
Waking, making, and faking life's truths
Destiny finds not the doomed souls

Forgiving mistakes, makes mistakens
Graves underneath an open heart
Old souls severed and stitched
Holy hearts hold no faith

Rendered in cries and screams
Molded from saddness and sorrow
Designed for sinning and loathing
Breathing pessimism upon birth

Outstanding protection for short periods
Without God's overprotective hand
One last chance accompaning a million second chances
Taken with risks and effort

He dies alone and cold
Forgotten upon buried snow
Withstanding winds and rain
Proven right by wrong

© Copyright 2000 Passnot - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-17 12:42 PM


WOW!!! this one is DEEP and dark...and so VERY well written..I love the last lines message!! great piece of work..glad to see ya back pass...seems like its been awhile.
janet marie

 When you look in the mirror...
Wish you were somebody else
Just a perfect reflection
You and no one else...
Minutes run into hours
Hours run into days
You're still waiting for someone
Who never ever came...
Go and run through the hallways
Find your way to the door
You will end up like always
Back where you were before...
Then you look in the mirror
Wish you were somebody else
But it's still your reflection
You and no one else...
Guster


thebob
Junior Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 15

2 posted 2000-02-23 10:32 PM


that was very good i too must say yet one never becomes tired of hearing others praise
and lightenment of a words well done
                             thebob

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-02-24 12:52 PM


Proven mastery I'd say.  This was way too good.  Bravo  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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