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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
My words mean nothing just am echo of my breath For no one understands what I hear I am no longer allowing my soul to speak It is locked, I threw away the key My hearts sheild is up This is now the point of no return I under estamated the powers of others You may not notice but my voice is the shreiking pain of another... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Tan Angel, take it from me .... NEVER EVER lock up your soul, shield it, hide it but don't lock it. I did for the last couple of years and I was living the life of the living dead, devoid of beauty, love and friendship. Sure some people hurt you but they won't ALL hurt you. (HUGS) So sorry for what you are going through, someone let you down. Forgive and forget and move on, for your own soul and peace's sake. At night the moon became a face, I met the spirit of life, the spirit of love and music. And I am better for it. ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
T-Angel... title this one "Echos of Myself" or just call it EXCELLENT!!! very good work!!! so much emotion spoke with so few words!!! loved it, janet marie When you look in the mirror... Wish you were somebody else Just a perfect reflection You and no one else... Minutes run into hours Hours run into days You're still waiting for someone Who never ever came... Go and run through the hallways Find your way to the door You will end up like always Back where you were before... Then you look in the mirror Wish you were somebody else But it's still your reflection You and no one else... Guster |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
when you lock up your soul you not only keep ou the bad but also the good. but well written. believe me i have tried to lock up my soul. it doesnt help anything. keep faith in the good. Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
That was straight to the point. This was a good poem, and lockin up the soul is one thing you cannot do. You can alwayz see the soul through others eyez. The soul cannot be hidden, its alwayz there and will be seen. But is was a good poem. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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