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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I feel its breath light on my neck singeing the hairs resideing there I double time the race drawing away A pace further ahead of the dread It catches again though run fast as i can i fall slowely into it den i am sinking its cave of sin where all who come are lost within My life force ends as time bends to the lair of the beast there is no end And i am alone in the darkness again All hope is gone tomorrow is nolonger a friend Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
makes me think about love as a whole. its kinda a beast, well, in my experiences anyways. its draws you in and then it bites your head off. well written!! well said!! Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
another excellent poem Walter... "a pace further ahead of dread"... very good!! and thanks for the compliments to my work...you owe me no apologies  take care, janet marie "...we were born before the wind...also younger than the sun... and my heart you have won...as we sailed into the mystic... I just want to rock your gypsy soul- just like in the days of old... and together we will float-into the mystic... Van Morrison |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
All hope is gone, tomorrow no longer a friend. Love those lines Walter. Great imagery  At night the moon became a face, I met the spirit of life, the spirit of love and music. And I am better for it. ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
another great poem. i think of It as fear. kinda reminds me of something i wrote a while back. |
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The Haunted Poet Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 37Sumner Washington |
Yes I can relate to this poem very well. This poem has a lot of feeling and I enhoy the meaning behind it. For being the first poem I have read of yours I must say it's great! |
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