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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-02-15 11:35 AM



imagine creation flowing
can you see ideas growing
as ice slips by the way

imagine hearts meeting
central characters
Cracked voices reeling

imagine old days long ago
knights and wizards
battle sways to then fro

imagine reality without love
minds without hearts,
souls left eternaly apart

imagine you me all
in one great ball
together in the sky

imagine all this and more
createing worlds that turn
Worlds of the old new and torn

imagine all these things
all the words that you dont do
and tell me what are you

imagine power pain and life
all on the edge of a knife
then you see me, only then you see me



© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
devinmaria
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 130
Middletown, Ohio
1 posted 2000-02-15 01:11 PM


WOW!!  NOT THAT YOU WERE TRYING BUT IM EXTREMELY IMPRESSED.  EVEN THOUGH ONE DOESNT WANT TO IMAGINE LIFE THAT WAY, I THINK EVERYONE DOES AT ONE TIME OR ANOTHER.  LIFE CAN BE OVERWHELMING DONT YOU AGREE
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-15 04:12 PM


Walter...
imagine me in awe...
this poem is incredible!!
janet marie

 "...we were born before the wind...also younger than the sun...
and my heart you have won...as we sailed into the mystic...
I just want to rock your gypsy soul-
just like in the days of old...
and together we will float-into the mystic...
Van Morrison


Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

3 posted 2000-02-16 07:40 AM


Ok can i ask miss Marie which Van Morrison song is your quote from out of interest

and i also appreciate all replys even if i dont reply to them if that makes sense

I think it is a better tribute to reply to their poems this is what i do

And who says i don't try (well i dont really but not trying with emotions certainly drains you)

 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd


JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 2000-02-16 11:59 AM


imagine reality without love
minds without hearts,
souls left eternaly apart

Liked the images you presented here.  

Jennifer

ill_tactics
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

5 posted 2000-02-16 05:27 PM


This was a good poem.  I enjoyed it very much.  Did you imagine this poem up?  If so, you have great imagination.  Keep up all the thoughts, and capture them on paper.  Much love, One love, PEACE
Lady Bere
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73
Valmeyer, Illinois USA
6 posted 2000-02-16 08:36 PM


This is fantastic!

The ideas do flow throughout this poem.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-02-16 08:38 PM


Imagine you on the end of a knife?  Not you Walter, you have to much to offer the world.
This was wonderful, love it.


 At night the moon became a face,
I met the spirit of life,
the spirit of love and music. And I am better for it.
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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