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Depression |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Dark and deadly Evil's ally Painful feeling Rebel to your heart Eternally occurs Solitary moments Single thoughts In depth sorrow Ordinarily forgotten Not remembered This may not seem like a poem but look real closely and u will see the title. To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
great job...very creative, and it looks like a poem to me...from all directions. janet marie "...we were born before the wind...also younger than the sun... and my heart you have won...as we sailed into the mystic... I just want to rock your gypsy soul- just like in the days of old... and together we will float-into the mystic... Van Morrison |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx for ur reply and if u want it to be to you that's ok, but it was something i wrote when i was really down and out so it won't happen often.   To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
This has depression described to a T. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
well done, well thought out and present. Depression who needs it?  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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The Haunted Poet Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 37Sumner Washington |
Depression sucks! I know that for a fact... |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Depression, what a lonely word. This poem reflects the thoughts and feelings I had, when I was depressed. I haven't gotten over it, so it brings back painful thoughts. But this poem was excellent, I've done one similar to this, but the word was HELP. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx all...this is the way i feel most of the time that's why i know exactly how it feels. Its like depression has been meant for me my whole life and no happiness is allowed for me  To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
tryin to keep it up *bump* To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Well, you described a large portion of my life. Well done chic. |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
i wasn't describing ur life mistik...it is mine that i describe, but then again there is alot of people that feel the way i do. though some have ways out of it and the only way that i could be set free from all of this would be to end my life. But i am even to depressed to do that To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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